Land of the Burning Sands by Rachel Neumeier

Land of the Burning Sands by Rachel NeumeierLand of the Burning Sands (Griffin Mage #2) by Rachel Neumeier
Published: Orbit Books (2010), eBook, 441pg
Source: Bought
Genres: Fantasy, Fiction

Gereint Enseichen of Casmantium knows little and cares less about the recent war in which his king tried to use griffins and fire to wrest territory from the neighboring country of Feierabiand…but he knows that his kingdom’s unexpected defeat offers him a chance to escape from his own servitude.

But now that the griffins find themselves in a position of strength, they are not inclined to forgive and the entire kingdom finds itself in deadly peril. Willing or not, Gereint will find himself caught up in a desperate struggle between the griffins and the last remaining Casmantian mage. Even the strongest gifts of making and building may not prove sufficient when the fiery wind of the griffins begins to bury the life of Casmantium beneath the burning sands… (from Amazon)

This book is one of those rare second-in-a-trilogy books that’s actually BETTER than the first book. The first book suffered from boring characters and an uneven pacing; this second book has FABULOUS characters and really excellent pacing. All the problems from the first book were resolved, and I think it basically redeemed the entire series for me.

The best thing about the Griffin Mage trilogy is the characters. Even Kes, who I didn’t enjoy reading about, is an interesting character. All the protagonists have layers upon layers, and even the secondary or tertiary characters have some depth to them. They’re just really neat people, the sort of people I enjoy following around for a few hours at a time. The only people who didn’t have any depth were the slave owners, which I think makes a definite point since mainly every other baddie gets at least some humanization/redemption thing. The slave owners? Did not.

The author
Griffins have a much reduced presence in this book, which I personally liked since it meant I could read more about the people I wanted to read about. Still, since this is the Griffin Mage trilogy, they do play an important role in the plot. Unfortunately, I think that role wasn’t as developed as much as it should have been.

Because neither the griffins nor Kes have a POV, none of the characters really know wtf is going on re:the griffins. They speculate, and they wonder, and they spend the majority of the book running around trying to fix something they’re not even sure is broken. The griffins’ contribution plot is finally revealed at the end of the book, but it almost felt like it was just stuck on there wily-nily. I think I would have liked the reveal better if we’d gotten more hints about it throughout the rest of the book, so it’d be more like a mystery than…whatever it actually was.

Still, despite that whole thing, I liked Land of the Burning Sands a lot more than the first book. The characters were fantastic and even though I think some people might be bored with the plot, I really enjoyed it. We got more details on the Griffin Mage world and the people who inhabit it, and the magic system got explained a bit more. And even though I think the absence of Kes was slightly damaging to the overall story arc, I was happy I didn’t have to plod through her POV again (although since, at the end of the first book, she wasn’t technically the person she was when her story started. So it might have been more interesting, who knows).

Read: March 25-26, 2012

Here’s an interview with Rachel Neumeier at Sci-Fi Fan Letter.

Why griffins?

I like all kinds of mythological creatures, but several wonderful griffins appear in books I really enjoyed — notably The Year of the Griffin by Diana Wynn Jones and The Magic and the Healing by Nick O’Donohue. I had those griffins in mind when I started Lord of the Changing Winds, though I instantly took my griffins in an entirely unexpected direction. I mean, unexpected even by me!

3 thoughts on “Land of the Burning Sands by Rachel Neumeier”

  1. Thanks for the link love. This reminds me that I really need to get to the third book in this series one day to find out how it was all wrapped up! I was very surprised by the direction the second book took and how different the POV was from the first. I agree with you about Kes too – I wanted to have her voice in this story, but she’d become less human and I’m not sure if she would have been very relatable anymore.

    1. The third book was GREAT! It did feel a bit like a repeat of the first/second books’ plots, but it was changed enough to keep it from being boring. Plus: the characters are AWESOME.

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